3rd draft

Again, much like the 1st and 2nd drafts, we had still not fully edited the font and colour correction. This was due to the expectancy of another editing session to improve on the flaws of this draft. In saying that, we felt that we had almost finished this project as all the footage was acquired and up to standard, and we believed we would not need to re-shoot. Main differences in this draft are with the editing throughout, and camera work in the final school sequence. The most noticeable improvement is that that sequence is far more fluid due to the use of still shots. Additionally, the hold on Joseph's stare towards the end creates tension, the angle of the camera also helps to build this as it is angled almost directly into his eyes from Ashley's point of view.